This is my first draft of the golf academy advert and although it gives me an idea about the pace and overall look of the advert it still needs some changes such as the actors in this edit are to old for the academy and therefore may send mixed messages about the age required and being appealed to in the advert.
This is one of the parts of the advert that will be changed and others which will also need to be changed like the ending of the advert is incomplete and therefore unshowable and therefore would send a confusing message to the adverts viewers once these and small other changes are made the advert should be ready and will require the viewing of the client to make sure nothing is incorrect or if they require anything to be changed.
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